Barb's+awful+story+without+a+title

This is the beginning of my story. I wasn't too sure if I wanted to keep it so i'm throwing it too all of you to rip apart. Either way i'm putting up a different story before the end of this weekend so be sure to check back and take a look at that one.

No Title The young caucasian woman swung her arm out as her alarm blasted in her ear; sending the contraption into the wall where it continued to go off. She rolled over;pushing herself up with her hands as her hair framed her face. The woman stood up and walked to the bathroom and took a shower. She could still hear the radio as she stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around her body. ** "Good morning Gotham City! The weather today is cloudy, with the usual light fog around those areas closest to the harbor. And now****to the top ten on today's countdown!"**
 * The woman glanced in the mirror and combed her hair into a careful ponytail as she examined her appearance. Her green eyes stood out on her **** freckled face. Noticing the time se quickly dressed in her police uniform and brushed her teeth before she rushed out the door of her apartment and **** headed towards the Dunkin' Donuts to buy something to bring in for work. **