Pressure

Pressure - Sean Murray
The surface tension apprehension of a mention apprehensive or sensitive immense but rented to the public eye no need to heed decreed to deny no need to run they fleed the reply they need not to die but live and their lives are precious and the pressure meshes precious sessions they need to fly wings are needed to bring to the sky and at this high they plead to see the land above to be inhabited by me.

Sanjana P:

Oh, i like this one. I think the length makes it like a sudden halt. If you read it like really fast. But its better. The "precious sessions" i really liked the sounds. The last line "inhabited" doesn't fit. Because it was all short sounds and the draggy inhabited.